Tuesday, August 5, 2008

Pivotal Chapter 13: Realizations

It was fun to write Kellie’s fight scene. Especially the part with the bird of paradise flower. :-) And the vamp she was fighting was fun.

And I liked writing Angel getting frustrated, too. I kinda wished I could have had a scene with him by himself. Or with someone else– whatever. Just a way to get him into the story more.

1 comment:

kellieanne said...

This was one of my favorite parts! I love that I cleaned off the flower and was worried about it getting crushed. I also loved that my scream startled Angel. Great writing!